Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Goldilocks and the Three Bears (1st person)

It was a very crisp spring morning. Baby Bear wanted to stay inside and play his new video game, and I wanted to watch the bear boxing, it was Grizzly Bear Tua vs. Black Bear Cameron on T.V. But no, Mama Bear wanted to go for a long walk in the forest. Baby Bear and I tried to dig our heels in, but Mama Bear just said "Stop being such a big grizzly bear and I'll make some porridge for when we get back!" So we walked out of the door, along the track to the forest.

The walk was so boring, though I knew better than to say that to Mama Bear! I couldn't believe I paid 40 pounds of salmon for a boxing match that I missed! While I was daydreaming about the match, Baby Bear was wildly chasing a butterfly all over the forest, and Mama Bear was droning on about all the 'pretty little flowers' she saw.

It had been a long walk , but we were finally home. We were all starving, so we rushed straight to the table, where we were in for a surprise...

"Someone's been eating my porridge," I growled.

"Someone's been eating my porridge," said Mama Bear.

"Someone's been eating my porridge and they ate it all up!" cried Baby Bear.

Curious, we moved on to the sitting room.

"Someone's been sitting in my chair," I growled.

"Someone's been sitting in my chair," said Mama Bear.

"Someone's been sitting in my chair and they've broken it all to pieces!" cried Baby Bear.

Now we were angry, so we marched upstairs to inspect the bedrooms.

"Someone's been sleeping in my bed," I growled.

"Someone's been sleeping in my bed," said Mama Bear.

"Someone's been sleeping in my bed and they're still there!" cried Baby Bear.

Mama bear and I rushed over to see what was going on. I heard a strange snoring sound, and there it was, lying in Baby Bears' bed, a wierd looking creature like I'd never seen before. It had a golden mane and pale skin. All of a sudden, it woke up and I let out a roar of fright. With that, it yelled something in a language I couldn't understand, leapt up from the bed and ran downstairs, out of the door and along the track to the forest.

I never saw that strange creature again.


1 comment:

  1. Hi George, I like the way you've correctly used speech marks, and I think the way you've written the ending is cool.